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#94 Help with re-shoot

GretaPicsGretaPics Registered Users Posts: 373 Major grins
edited January 20, 2012 in The Dgrin Challenges
OK - Did a new upload so for those who only saw a red X is this better? Since I had a chance to re-shoot my current entry, addressing some of the helpful comments on the DOF and background lights/shapes, it's now down to my current entry vs. the newer version and they're different so I'm having a hard time deciding. Can anyone help me choose? Thanks, GP

1. Taste (current entry)
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2. Garden Party (new version)

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    WhatSheSawWhatSheSaw Registered Users Posts: 2,221 Major grins
    edited January 19, 2012
    It may be me, but I only see a red x for #2.
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    EaracheEarache Registered Users Posts: 3,533 Major grins
    edited January 19, 2012
    Garden Party is much nicer in composition and lighting!
    Eric ~ Smugmug
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    kdotaylorkdotaylor Registered Users Posts: 1,280 Major grins
    edited January 19, 2012
    I, too, only see a red X
    Kate
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    "You cannot depend on your eyes when your imagination is out of focus." Mark Twain
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    MemolMemol Registered Users Posts: 115 Major grins
    edited January 19, 2012
    I like #2. It looks sharper and brighter.
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    sapphire73sapphire73 Registered Users, Super Moderators Posts: 1,951 moderator
    edited January 19, 2012
    I love #2! (Btw, looking more closely at #1, I'm seeing some texture in the dark area. Not sure whether that is intentional or the result of a filter or something?)

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    JennJenn Registered Users Posts: 1,009 Major grins
    edited January 19, 2012
    I like #2, too. Now, I'm hungry and it's all your fault! :)
    Jenn (from Oklahoma)
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    Leica Mega O.I.S./28mm WIDE :smile6
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    CHANDLERJACHANDLERJA Registered Users Posts: 400 Major grins
    edited January 20, 2012
    Love #2! Great shot and idea!
    Jeromy
    http://snaptx.smugmug.com/
    Light is everything in life and photography.
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    Bradley KBradley K Registered Users Posts: 4 Beginner grinner
    edited January 20, 2012
    Yes! Garden Party is much more enticing to my eye and my tummy. The grapes, and especially the pose of the stem first catch my focus and begin a journey around the scene to inspect crackers, cheese and then.... while in "taste" there is very little to generate the interest to look.

    Nice job
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    lkbartlkbart Registered Users Posts: 1,912 Major grins
    edited January 20, 2012
    Agree with all - #1 is a great idea, #2 is that idea executed beautifully!
    ~Lillian~
    A photograph is an artistic expression of life, captured one moment at a time . . .
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    PedalGirlPedalGirl Registered Users Posts: 794 Major grins
    edited January 20, 2012
    I really like the bokeh effect in the newest edit.
    Pho-tog-ra-pher (n) 1. One who practices photography 2. one obsessed with capturing life with their camera. 3. One who eats, sleeps and breathes photographs. 4. One who sees the world in 4x6.
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