Critics

torags

bfjr

Of all your recent Art Exhibit posts this one is a Winner to me.

but.......................:D

In B&W with little selective brightness on the living faces.

but again this one is a little "WTF"

RSL

It's a good shot, Rags, but it needs a bit of work with Viveza. The tone of the women needs to come up -- especially their faces -- to give them better separation from the background.

torags

RSL wrote: »

It's a good shot, Rags, but it needs a bit of work with Viveza. The tone of the women needs to come up -- especially their faces -- to give them better separation from the background.

Ha!... Vivenza?? I'm still on Picasa 3...

Good points I'm going to try to improve them. The faces seem a little soft to me

richardman

Well, of course if there is a position such that the live women could look like they are PART of the picture, then the picture would really work with no separation from the background. You know, like the nuns and spiral abstract arts photo from HCB where the nuns become part of the spiral.

torags

RSL wrote: »

It's a good shot, Rags, but it needs a bit of work with Viveza. The tone of the women needs to come up -- especially their faces -- to give them better separation from the background.

Some labor on this Russ, thanks for the suggestions

bdcolen

Excellent! But...lose the caption...I don't see critics here. In fact I don't see any conscious connection - on the part of the women - of the women to the photo. I just see three women, probably friends, caught chatting in front of a photo you had the good eye to work them into. :-)

torags

thanks bd