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DDD #95 C&C Please

DonRicklinDonRicklin Registered Users Posts: 5,551 Major grins
edited February 8, 2012 in The Dgrin Challenges
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Rapunzel, Rapunzel. Let down your hair!

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    SAMBALAMSAMBALAM Registered Users Posts: 64 Big grins
    edited February 5, 2012
    I like the idea and the colors but I feel like the picture is missing something. It is difficult to tell what the picture is at first so it does not have that initial wow factor. Maybe if you were able to take the picture again but slide back a little so you can see more detail at the top.
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    DonRicklinDonRicklin Registered Users Posts: 5,551 Major grins
    edited February 5, 2012
    Thank you for viewing and commenting. I can reshoot today and include a window opening ear the top.

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    sapphire73sapphire73 Registered Users, Super Moderators Posts: 1,948 moderator
    edited February 5, 2012
    I think the subject and title work well together, but agree that it would be great to see a window near the top. Good to hear that you will be able to reshoot!

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    DonRicklinDonRicklin Registered Users Posts: 5,551 Major grins
    edited February 5, 2012
    It's on the way when I get home!

    :D

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    DonRicklinDonRicklin Registered Users Posts: 5,551 Major grins
    edited February 5, 2012
    Reshoot!
    DonRicklin wrote: »
    It's on the way when I get home!

    :D

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    And here it is!:

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    Thanks for looking!

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    sapphire73sapphire73 Registered Users, Super Moderators Posts: 1,948 moderator
    edited February 5, 2012
    While the angle is more extreme with the first, I think this one works better with your title and helps us appreciate the structure even more. I like being able to see a bit more of the detail of the stonework. If you prefer the first image, you could change the title. I do like the contrast of that lower window with the stonework. But overall, I prefer the 2nd one.

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    WhatSheSawWhatSheSaw Registered Users Posts: 2,221 Major grins
    edited February 6, 2012
    I agree with Gretchen. Nice stone work! And the 2nd one works better.
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    SAMBALAMSAMBALAM Registered Users Posts: 64 Big grins
    edited February 6, 2012
    another vote for #2!
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    MikeKMikeK Registered Users Posts: 227 Major grins
    edited February 8, 2012
    Ah, Bancroft Tower, love it!

    #2, definitely.
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    DonRicklinDonRicklin Registered Users Posts: 5,551 Major grins
    edited February 8, 2012
    MikeK wrote: »
    Ah, Bancroft Tower, love it!

    #2, definitely.
    Ah, you recognize it! thumb.gif

    Thanks for looking and commenting!

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