Any thoughts on this...

jberenbajberenba Registered Users Posts: 32 Big grins
edited February 20, 2012 in The Dgrin Challenges
This is a lily curling up around its center. Any critiques or thoughts based on the challenge.
Critiques always wanted and accepted.
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  • WhatSheSawWhatSheSaw Registered Users Posts: 2,221 Major grins
    edited February 15, 2012
    I like it! I tend to like abstracts.

    You might try angling it a bit and have the lead in more off center.
  • SAMBALAMSAMBALAM Registered Users Posts: 64 Big grins
    edited February 15, 2012
    I am a big fan of abstract photography as well. I do like this picture a lot but I think for THIS competition, the picture would suffer because it is not easily recognizable. I agree that maybe a different angle would help.
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  • tinamarie52tinamarie52 Registered Users Posts: 954 Major grins
    edited February 18, 2012
    I see two vanishing points in this and they draw me in different directions. The obvious line is one, but the shape of the flower becomes conical on the right. It leads me right out of the image.

    I think this needs to be brighter. It would also be stronger if you could use the Rule of Thirds.

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  • dniednie Users Awaiting Email Confirmation Posts: 1,351 Major grins
    edited February 19, 2012
    I like it...
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  • sapphire73sapphire73 Registered Users, Super Moderators Posts: 1,970 moderator
    edited February 20, 2012
    I agree that brightening it might be a good idea, but I like it!

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