DSS 96 - Last minute Feedback please

MemolMemol Registered Users Posts: 115 Major grins
edited February 20, 2012 in The Dgrin Challenges
Hi,

I have already posted my picture (Number 0), but I wanted to share a few more pictures for this subject and get feedback.

Thanks for any comments.

0.
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Comments

  • ghinsonghinson Registered Users Posts: 933 Major grins
    edited February 20, 2012
    I like #6, but would like to see it bigger to know for sure. I also think #1 could be interesting and more on theme if you were to crop out the tree on the right, and bring the top down, cropping just a hair above the top of the building. If you then also crop out the whispy tree on the left... Hmmm. What do you think?
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  • WhatSheSawWhatSheSaw Registered Users Posts: 2,221 Major grins
    edited February 20, 2012
    I really like your current entry. The lighting and color and repetition are all excellent.

    I also like the building in #1, but think you might not have nailed it yet. Like Greg said, the trees distract a bit from the building.

    #6 is nice with the dual suns, but you might try cropping off the traffic on the left.
  • sapphire73sapphire73 Registered Users, Super Moderators Posts: 1,976 moderator
    edited February 20, 2012
    I like your current entry best, but also find 1, 4, and 6 appealing.
  • slpollettslpollett Registered Users Posts: 1,223 Major grins
    edited February 20, 2012
    I really like your current entry better than the others. I might give a nod to #1 if it were cropped as Greg suggested. That one has potential for sure.

    Good luck.
    Sherry
  • MemolMemol Registered Users Posts: 115 Major grins
    edited February 20, 2012
    Thanks for your comments. I crop out the trees from 1, but not much left. I had to go closer and take the photo, but they were power washing the area so I had to leave.
  • PedalGirlPedalGirl Registered Users Posts: 794 Major grins
    edited February 20, 2012
    Your original entry is the best, I think. :)
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