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Lumber Jack

D3SshooterD3Sshooter Registered Users Posts: 1,187 Major grins
edited March 2, 2012 in People
This model wanted some hard pictures.


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    anonymouscubananonymouscuban Registered Users, Retired Mod Posts: 4,586 Major grins
    edited February 26, 2012
    Like the first shot. Second shot is good but I don't get "lumberjack" from him in this shot. Well, maybe if the Village People had a lumberjack; his pose is a bit feminine. I think it's the head tilt. Last one has a lot of smugdies (artifacts) in the BG, especially in the immediate areas around the models.

    BTW, Lighting in all are of them are great.
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    CowboydougCowboydoug Registered Users Posts: 401 Major grins
    edited February 26, 2012
    anonymouscuban wrote: »
    Like the first shot. Second shot is good but I don't get "lumberjack" from him in this shot. Well, maybe if the Village People had a lumberjack; his pose is a bit feminine. I think it's the head tilt. Last one has a lot of smugdies (artifacts) in the BG, especially in the immediate areas around the models.

    BTW, Lighting in all are of them are great.

    1st off... I like your lighting & use of Adjust, you have worked them wonderfully ... I see some slight halo artifacts, which I know all to well can be a pain...
    2nd... I agree with all the above... even the Village People thingy.. lol thumb.gif
    Last Shot:... Seems to contrived... your guys pose is ...stiff,,, as is the middle gal...
    ...Your guy doesn't appear to be sitting on anything and his back leg is cut off... ?
    I think if the guy were sitting where the Amazon woman is and in the same pose this would have rocked this shot.
    This seems like it may be a composited shot... is it?
    I really like your stuff... and always enjoy looking...
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    zoomerzoomer Registered Users Posts: 3,688 Major grins
    edited February 27, 2012
    I think this is a fun idea.
    First is my favorite, if I am nitpicking, if the light had been just a bit more behind him you may have gotten some rim light on the other side of his head. I bet he will love that one.
    Don't love 2 or 3....do you have any others from the set that you can post?
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    D3SshooterD3Sshooter Registered Users Posts: 1,187 Major grins
    edited February 27, 2012
    zoomer wrote: »
    I think this is a fun idea.
    First is my favorite, if I am nitpicking, if the light had been just a bit more behind him you may have gotten some rim light on the other side of his head. I bet he will love that one.
    Don't love 2 or 3....do you have any others from the set that you can post?


    Thanks everybody for viewing, indeed the last one has some issues as it is a composed picture. Strangly enough its a hit on social forums amongst the youngsters. Where as we photographers see all the errors.

    i will post a few more from this group as requested.
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    KinkajouKinkajou Registered Users Posts: 1,240 Major grins
    edited March 1, 2012
    I agree that #1 is great. I think part of the issue for #2 is that he seems to have hips forward and shoulders back a little bit. If he had shoulders forward, I think it would look a little more authoritative. On #3... the position of the chainsaw is really... uh... an interesting choice.
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    BilsenBilsen Registered Users Posts: 2,143 Major grins
    edited March 2, 2012
    I liike them D3.

    I also think the PP on the last one does a great job of conveying the "rock hard" mood you were aiming for.thumb.gif

    I do think you should have shown a bit more of the girls in # 2 to convey the full sexiness of the image, but then again, I only shoot girls so I'm obviously biased.mwink.gif
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