Reagan

LiquidOps

if I may quote Andy...

"Enjoy During Your Lunch Photography"

I was supposed to do her shoot in a week or two, down at the beach, but it turns out, she needed some new photos by tomorrow.

Well, who am I to turn down a beautiful model

So, during my lunch time, I had her meet me and we did the photo shoot in one of the courtyards at my work

Still working on the PP for the shoot, but here's a sample or two

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3.


Thanks for looking,

Steven

LiquidOps

here's another




Steven

OneWayMule

My quick take...

No1: I like the pose and the slight tilt but you're using direct flash and it shows. It gave the zippers on her top a cool look but her forehead down to her cheek and even her hair is shining. There's too much negative space above her head. Imagine cropping it right above her hair.

No2: Again, i like the pose but too much negative space on top. Her right arm is cut but not her left. But the colors stood out the most. I know when you look at your pic for a long a time, you cant tell but the colors are off. Looks kinda bluish-green?

No3: The best one here imo. Beautiful face and smile... nearly perfect framing. But again, hot spots from top-right of her forehead to her teeth.

No4: Wait... did i say no3 was my fav? Nevermind, this one is very umm.. pleasing The look on her face is right on, imo. Cropping is fine but this one has the worst case of over-exposer. Her face is nearly washed out.


I look forward to seeing these again after your post work!

Mayndi

i really enjoy the shots.

i'd like to call her hairdresser, i love the hair too :

LiquidOps

OneWayMule wrote:

My quick take...

No1: I like the pose and the slight tilt but you're using direct flash and it shows. It gave the zippers on her top a cool look but her forehead down to her cheek and even her hair is shining. There's too much negative space above her head. Imagine cropping it right above her hair.

I was experimenting with using fill flash... People make it look a lot easier than it is.

No2: Again, i like the pose but too much negative space on top. Her right arm is cut but not her left. But the colors stood out the most. I know when you look at your pic for a long a time, you cant tell but the colors are off. Looks kinda bluish-green?

I do see that the colors are off... still learning my way around Post Processing as well.

No3: The best one here imo. Beautiful face and smile... nearly perfect framing. But again, hot spots from top-right of her forehead to her teeth.

No4: Wait... did i say no3 was my fav? Nevermind, this one is very umm.. pleasing The look on her face is right on, imo. Cropping is fine but this one has the worst case of over-exposer. Her face is nearly washed out.


I look forward to seeing these again after your post work!

Thanks for taking a look and taking the time to critique. I really need it. I get a huge joy out of taking pictures of people. It just does something inside me that feels like no other. I strive to capture the beauty of people... not just the outside, but who they are on the inside.

Thank you again,

Steven

LiquidOps

Mayndi wrote:

i really enjoy the shots.

i'd like to call her hairdresser, i love the hair too :

Thank you Mayndi

I think she is the hairdresser haha

Thanks for stopping by,

Steven

LiquidOps

What do you think of this one?




Steven

PossumCorner

Yes.
That's the one. Thanks for adding it on. Great smile, lovely eyes.

ScottMcLeod

LiquidOps wrote:

I was experimenting with using fill flash... People make it look a lot easier than it is.

Steven

I'm in the same boat as you, and the one thing i've learned... do *whatever* you can to diffuse the flash.

If you look further back, I posted a bunch of a girl named Allison, and those were all shot by firing my flash off of a white reflector.

I'm very much considering buying Gary Fong's new Lightsphere (2-PJ model)... The photos just speak for themselves...

LiquidOps

ScottMcLeod wrote:

I'm in the same boat as you, and the one thing i've learned... do *whatever* you can to diffuse the flash.

If you look further back, I posted a bunch of a girl named Allison, and those were all shot by firing my flash off of a white reflector.

I'm very much considering buying Gary Fong's new Lightsphere (2-PJ model)... The photos just speak for themselves...

I agree with what you are saying. This was kind of a spur of the moment thing. I'm trying to get my photography off the ground so I can afford the extra equipment I need. (Expensive addiction here) haha

I want to get some reflectors as well as some sort of diffuser for my 383

Thanks,

Steven