Great color and eyes. Do love this one. Watch leaning on her elbow into the camera and then turning her head to the camera. The neck tends to wrinkle up and that tenon pops out. Purchase some lip gloss for those who don't bring it. I'd bring the exposure down a tad and maybe saturate the irsis. I'm also a sucker for a good vignette.
For a true glamor image you might want to smooth out the skin on the right (camera left) side of her mouth and a little blur on her chin and under her right eye. (I use Luminosty blend mode at 30% or so). I don't mind the shadows on the near side BUT the shadow is definitely bringing out some skin imperfection ion those areas. I'm told that's why "glamor" lighting is usually pretty flat.
I feel kind of hypocritical saying those things since I like to leave a model as natural as possible but, if the stated goal is Glam, I think you might want some more PP. I also agree Hack about a vignette for this image.
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This could be a personal thing and may not even be considered correct, but...
I don't like shadows on the closest side of the face to the viewer. Other than that...nice model and nice pose.
For a true glamor image you might want to smooth out the skin on the right (camera left) side of her mouth and a little blur on her chin and under her right eye. (I use Luminosty blend mode at 30% or so). I don't mind the shadows on the near side BUT the shadow is definitely bringing out some skin imperfection ion those areas. I'm told that's why "glamor" lighting is usually pretty flat.
I feel kind of hypocritical saying those things since I like to leave a model as natural as possible but, if the stated goal is Glam, I think you might want some more PP. I also agree Hack about a vignette for this image.
Canon 600D; Canon 1D Mk2;
24-105 f4L IS; 70-200 f4L IS; 50mm 1.4; 28-75 f2.8; 55-250 IS; 580EX & (2) 430EX Flash,
Model Galleries: http://bilsen.zenfolio.com/
Everything Else: www.pbase.com/bilsen