Indoor and Outdoors

digidronedigidrone Registered Users Posts: 280 Major grins
edited April 8, 2012 in People
Been reading here and practicing!

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Axe-Man-Wornek-0948-L.jpg

2

halloweeners-L.jpg

C&C welcome!
Thanks,
Royce

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Comments

  • Bryce WilsonBryce Wilson Registered Users Posts: 1,586 Major grins
    edited April 5, 2012
    To my eye, number two is perfect in every way!

    Excellent job
  • novicesnappernovicesnapper Registered Users Posts: 445 Major grins
    edited April 5, 2012
    Lol, my choice also, the look, the hand on the hips, off the chart cute factor. Great job on the DOF and exposure. I see this one being framed and on a wall.
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  • HackboneHackbone Registered Users Posts: 4,027 Major grins
    edited April 5, 2012
    Do love #2 but throw a vignette on it to draw more attention to the subject.
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  • zoomerzoomer Registered Users Posts: 3,688 Major grins
    edited April 5, 2012
    Cute shots, look good.
    The second one as suggested already, the light on the forground is brighter than the light on your subjects face.
    Vignette would fix that and next time, place your light more on the subject less on the foreground.
    Definitely on the right track.
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  • digidronedigidrone Registered Users Posts: 280 Major grins
    edited April 6, 2012
    Thanks Bryce
    I appreciate it!

    Thanks Novice,
    I already have a spot picked out on the wall....

    Charles, Mike, thanks for commenting!
    I will use a combo vignette, or burn and bring it down!


    Thanks again for your time!
    Thanks,
    Royce

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  • FlowermanFlowerman Registered Users Posts: 141 Major grins
    edited April 6, 2012
    I have not posted in quite some time, but am always looking - today I had to chime in - IMHO #1 is the shot for framing with just one adjustment - crop it at the end of the guitar. The eye of the viewer never has to wander - look at the expression on the chils face - and the eyes are the greatest - light shinning on hair seals it.
  • VayCayMomVayCayMom Registered Users Posts: 1,870 Major grins
    edited April 6, 2012
    Wow nice job perfect exposure, #2 is also my favorite. Looks like you are a fast learner. :D
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  • GothamGotham Registered Users Posts: 187 Major grins
    edited April 6, 2012
    Both are fantastic. I don't think I agree about the vignette on #2...I'd like to see the results if you add it, but I like it as is.
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  • TinstaflTinstafl Registered Users Posts: 355 Major grins
    edited April 7, 2012
    Both are great. Like number 2 as well. Agree with all the comments about them as well especially the tighter crop on number one. I might also tweak up the black point a bit to turn e background fully black. I see a couple lines a bit lighter in there.
  • digidronedigidrone Registered Users Posts: 280 Major grins
    edited April 7, 2012
    Flowerman,
    Thanks for your time and insight. I will work on the suggestions!

    Trudy,
    Thank you!

    Gotham,
    Thanks for your input, I will post up the changes!

    Tinstafl,
    Appreciate your thoughts on the background! I'll work it over...
    Thanks,
    Royce

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  • SamSam Registered Users Posts: 7,419 Major grins
    edited April 7, 2012
    Looks like the practice is paying off!!!

    Sam
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  • Gary752Gary752 Registered Users Posts: 934 Major grins
    edited April 8, 2012
    #2 gets my vote! Can't wait to see the re-edits and what you end up with.

    GaryB
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  • digidronedigidrone Registered Users Posts: 280 Major grins
    edited April 8, 2012
    Sam
    Thanks very much!

    GaryB
    Thanks for your time!
    Thanks,
    Royce

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