Couple more for critique
Still trying.
First one is 'crooked' but that is the lay of the land. If I straighten it trees in the back lean the other way? Besides that your thoughts on how to improve.

This is a Don shot..Seems he stood in about the exact same spot and took a picture 35 years ago?? I can't remember what I did yesterday:scratch He is lookin for the picture:):
First one is 'crooked' but that is the lay of the land. If I straighten it trees in the back lean the other way? Besides that your thoughts on how to improve.

This is a Don shot..Seems he stood in about the exact same spot and took a picture 35 years ago?? I can't remember what I did yesterday:scratch He is lookin for the picture:):

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Lovely light and colours, but,
Try some different angles and viewpoints to maybe add some drama
Reading that back it sounds a little harsh, it's not meant to be, honest
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