Domino
galla47
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Hey everyone...
Do any of the following strike you as a potential entry?
Do any of the following strike you as a potential entry?
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very clever. I really like this composition/lighting/idea/photograph.
spells competition to me
-daniel-
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I would say on the first try to focus more on the first seven domino's and lead up to the falling action instead of the other way around.
I would like to say that the transition from black to brown is a realy nice touch to this photo, keep this affect if you decide to shoot this one again .
On the third photo the only thing that I noticed is that at the bottom/center of the photo your flash seems to have been a little to harsh and it left a yellow spot on the table top. I realy like the shadowing that you created in this photo with the flash but if there is any way that you can shoot this again I would suggest that you try using a black piece of construction paper to diffuse some of the extra flash.
I hope that I have been some help for you.
Bob
Erich
The first is fantastic, I also think you might have a winner with the focus brought forward, also Darren didn't have a bad idea with buffing the table. But again I just wanted to emphasise that the BG brown to black looks really fantastic.
Nice Bones!
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I'll try the first one again. I was originally shooting for an extended exposure to try and catch the action of falling. But then I dialed up the ISO to try and catch them falling and I liked the 'freeze frame' action even better.
I'll try it with the foward focus tonight to see how that comes out. As far as the comment to use a wider angle... That one was at 18mm, which is as wide as I have.
The last one was more to be funny... dgrin style...
Hey Everyone,
I truly appreciate your feedback!!
Based on your feedback, here is a re-shoot. I tried buffing the table, but I'm not sure you can tell. I won't tell you haw many darn times I lined them up!!
I hope that this helps, Bob.
It works
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"Photography is a medium of formidable contradictions. It is ridiculously easy and almost impossibly difficult." Edward Steichen
Bob
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First I would like to say that I goofed and would like to thank "CABBEY" for pointing this out, and for this oversite I would also like to say that I am sorry to both "ALKHEMIST" and "GALLA47" for my incorrect assumption of the challenge 51 rules, I hope that this will not happen again in the future.
Again thank you CABBEY for being on your toes and not being affraid to bring it to my attention.
Bob.
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