Roll-A-Ball Hard Sell

David_S85David_S85 Administrators Posts: 13,244 moderator
edited May 18, 2012 in Street and Documentary
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  • Quincy TQuincy T Registered Users Posts: 1,090 Major grins
    edited May 18, 2012
    I don't care for this one as much as the image of the family in the ride. I get the idea of what you're trying to capture, and it's pretty clear, I just feel this image lacks a certain exciting/emotive element. It's still a good shot, but it's not as good of a shot.

    Maybe it's the angle. It's like there are too many layers of the image on one plane, because it's shot straight on.
  • lensmolelensmole Registered Users Posts: 1,548 Major grins
    edited May 18, 2012
    Its hard to know what this image is about,is it the Roll a Ball sign or the hard sell ? The placement of the bold horizontal line makes it very top heavy and splits the image in two. I think part of the problem is that it was taken from too far away,it would have been better to get in close and personnel with a wider angle and title it Hard Sell.

    Lensmole
    http://www.lensmolephotography.com/
  • RSLRSL Registered Users Posts: 839 Major grins
    edited May 18, 2012
    You needed more periphery on this one, David. The guy seems isolated from the world.
    Russ Lewis
    www.FineArtSnaps.com
  • David_S85David_S85 Administrators Posts: 13,244 moderator
    edited May 18, 2012
    Thanks, all. I agree, the pair are detached and not engaged much.
    My Smugmug
    "You miss 100% of the shots you don't take" - Wayne Gretzky
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