Sami

B Joyner

Hi here are a couple from my latest attempt at some portrait photography. Still just looking for tips on ways I can improve. Thanks for any feedback.

Dooginfif20

These are really good. I think #2 is the best. 1 could use a little more light in her face and 3 would be better in a slightly different angle that would show a little more of her body. Right now the crop is just a tad strange. I wouldnt call these an attempt. I would call these success with a little work to do. Good stuff

Hackbone

I think 3 has the most potential but it is cropped a bit too tight for my taste. Give it more room and bring the exposure down a bit. You have a very nice light pattern on the face so show it off.

On #2 I think your lens choice is distorting her too much again for my taste. A longer lens is usually a better choice. Again you've got a nice light pattern so bring down you exposure a tad.

#1 is the obligatatory "Hey I've got a tat, can I show it?"

Hope that helps.