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RyanS

michswiss

This has bones, but it needs a crop. No idea if you had options at the time you took it. I had a play and if you took it down from the upper left side, maintaining the aspect ratio, to where the pieces in the upper right were just being cut off at the neck makes a really nice shot.

lensmole

IMO the vertical lines entering and exiting the middle frame,rarely work well,except for a pattern shot,the eye has a tendency to follow them instead of lingering and wandering about the image.

lizzard_nyc

I see nothing but two women hanging a sign.
Yes they are standing by the mannequins, in between them actually, but...

Maybe if they were facing towards camera?

I don't see bones Jenn.

michswiss

lizzard_nyc wrote: »

I see nothing but two women hanging a sign.
Yes they are standing by the mannequins, in between them actually, but...

Maybe if they were facing towards camera?

I don't see bones Jenn.

Cool with that. Not much emotion to pull out of it. Lacks engagement.

The shot improves in my view with the crop, but cropping should't be the goal. It might not be good, but it was fun in and of itself when I played with it in the browser.

RSL

Sorry, Ryan. No crop is going to save this one. You just can't win 'em all.

RyanS

Thank you for taking the time to respond, and thank you for looking. I would not be offended by anyone doing a re-work of anything I post. Visual communication is preferred. Words not required. Feel free to post any re-worked versions you like, if you feel like it. I would appreciate any contribution. I'm going to update my sig to mention that as default from now on.