One from Sunday

RichardRichard Administrators, Vanilla Admin Posts: 19,967 moderator
edited June 11, 2012 in Street and Documentary
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  • bdcolenbdcolen Registered Users Posts: 3,804 Major grins
    edited June 6, 2012
    Nice one, Richard - just wish the white shirt wasn't quite so white. :-) But the composition, and the expression on the Woman In Black, are wonderful.
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  • michswissmichswiss Registered Users, Retired Mod Posts: 2,235 Major grins
    edited June 6, 2012
    Yeah, nice scene. I assume B.D. is referring to the dude in the white shirt in the background. It does stand out somewhat. Is it possible to dodge it a little? Just curious, it looks like the woman in black is selling / holding lottery tickets of some form. An unsolicited visitor?
  • bfjrbfjr Registered Users Posts: 10,980 Major grins
    edited June 7, 2012
    I was good with this capture, until B.D. pointed out Mr. Bright White rolleyes1.gifblbl.gif
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  • RichardRichard Administrators, Vanilla Admin Posts: 19,967 moderator
    edited June 7, 2012
    Yeah, that shirt is a bit distracting--especially after it has been pointed out. lol3.gif. OK, raw file to the rescue:

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  • RichardRichard Administrators, Vanilla Admin Posts: 19,967 moderator
    edited June 7, 2012
    michswiss wrote: »
    Just curious, it looks like the woman in black is selling / holding lottery tickets of some form. An unsolicited visitor?
    Yep, she's hustling lottery tickets.
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  • seastackseastack Registered Users Posts: 716 Major grins
    edited June 7, 2012
    That hand gesture could be interpreted as, uhhm, not so nice in Greece! ;))
  • Quincy TQuincy T Registered Users Posts: 1,090 Major grins
    edited June 8, 2012
    It's unfortunate about the super-Clorox shirt man, but at the same time, after the fix you posted, I really enjoy the layers in this image. A lot going on, and streamlined pretty well alongside the main subject of the women's conversation.
  • rainbowrainbow Registered Users Posts: 2,765 Major grins
    edited June 8, 2012
    His hair is still cloroxed... rolleyes1.gif

    Not sure if it better cropped on the right or if the line of heads adds to the shot... I like the three front subjects, though I wanted the hustler's eyes to show...
  • bfjrbfjr Registered Users Posts: 10,980 Major grins
    edited June 8, 2012
    Ya know after looking at both versions, I'm stil OK with version one.

    If for no other reason then Mr. White draws me into the image.
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  • RichardRichard Administrators, Vanilla Admin Posts: 19,967 moderator
    edited June 10, 2012
    Thanks for the feedback, guys. I don't think I would want to lose Mr. Clorox altogether as he is placed on the main diagonal. I suppose I could dye his hair, but it probably doesn't matter much now that the shirt is under control.
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  • lensmolelensmole Registered Users Posts: 1,548 Major grins
    edited June 10, 2012
    I agree with Ben, I like the original, somehow I feel it adds to the composition.

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  • YaflyyadieYaflyyadie Registered Users Posts: 558 Major grins
    edited June 11, 2012
    Different set of eyes, different views.
    I too believe Mr. "Clorox" adds to the composition in general.
    As usual with my SPOV, very good job Richard.thumb.gif
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  • bdcolenbdcolen Registered Users Posts: 3,804 Major grins
    edited June 11, 2012
    Richard wrote: »
    Yeah, that shirt is a bit distracting--especially after it has been pointed out. lol3.gif. OK, raw file to the rescue:

    i-48xNnjD-XL.jpg

    Perfecto!!rolleyes1.gifrofl
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