Client unhappy with photos
jmphotocraft
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She said the lighting was too harsh, what do you think?
This room is completely off-white, so I just bounced my flash off the wall to my left. There is a window to my right. I think maybe I aimed the flash a little high as I agree the light is not getting into her eyes as well as I would have liked. But I don't think these are harsh...? Anyway, I've offered a re-shoot with umbrella, or a refund. :cry
This room is completely off-white, so I just bounced my flash off the wall to my left. There is a window to my right. I think maybe I aimed the flash a little high as I agree the light is not getting into her eyes as well as I would have liked. But I don't think these are harsh...? Anyway, I've offered a re-shoot with umbrella, or a refund. :cry
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An "accurate" reproduction of a scene and a good photograph are often two different things.
An "accurate" reproduction of a scene and a good photograph are often two different things.
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I'm guessing the room was a little dark, so the best option would have probably been to use two flashes (bounce off the left wall, and a second flash to hit her face). Alternatively, you could have cranked the ISO, changed angle and shot towards more even lighting and just used the on-camera flash for fill.
Second, I would have gone with a tighter crop. She looks kinda chubby in the pictures, and she probably thought the same thing. I tried cropping the top picture right below the elbow and thought it looked more flattering. It also brings more attention to her eyes.
Good luck!
If it turns out well on the next shoot I would love to the changes and what you did.
Good luck,
Phil
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An "accurate" reproduction of a scene and a good photograph are often two different things.
Now when discussing herself, you ain't never going to get that kind of honesty, so it does present a real problem to determine what the REAL issue is.
I see an ok photo taken by a competent photographer. I don't see high end creative pro portrait photographer.
One thing that could help is what the client wanted the image for. For me I see where she came up with the harsh light comment. She isn't looking at the camera. Has a nice smile appears relaxed but somewhat disconnected. The background and environment doesn't look to be well thought out and is distracting.
In the second image I think the black outfit added an additional exposure DR challenge without adding anything significant to the image.
She has these high / prominent cheeks creating deep shadows on both sides of her face. I think if you can soften these it would go a long way to satisfying her.
Just my thoughts.
Sam
This is what I suggest as well. I took the first image you posted and ran it through PortProf on default and it really made a difference. I think you might be able to tweak the shots you have into something she likes using PortProf or a similar tool.
can I see?
Sam, she is a realtor, she wanted these for her business. I'll take "competent photographer" - I'm obviously not high end or ultra hip/creative, and I charge accordingly! But for a professional portrait I err on the conservative side. Also, she selected the room.
An "accurate" reproduction of a scene and a good photograph are often two different things.
http://www.smugmug.com/gallery/23522659_D2Rmm5#!i=1901859371&k=44GvCV5
Use the left-right keys to go back and forth repeatedly to see the difference. I didn't do any touch up on anything other than just running the face only through Portrait Professional and accepting all the defaults. I like the results, and with a little more work I think it could be quite nice.
I'm not an expert in portraits or this tool, but I have successfully used it a handful of times.
I have it used a number of times - and you will be able to brighten the eyes some.
Phil
"You don't take a photograph, you make it." ~Ansel Adams
Phil
I think that for a business card a plain or simple background devoid of objects would translate better to the small image printed on the business card. Also might think about cropping tighter.
You are right about a simple conservative image for this use.
I think your re-shoot will be successful.
Sam
Thanks. That doesn't solve what I think is the main problem of not enough light in her eyes. I don't think it could be solved without a re-shoot.
An "accurate" reproduction of a scene and a good photograph are often two different things.
Thanks. I think the first shot cropped would work well for a business card. Well, if there was more light in her eyes!
Go nuts, that's why I posted it. Thanks in advance for your time.
An "accurate" reproduction of a scene and a good photograph are often two different things.
This might work a little better. Brightened the eyes and softened the light on the face a bit.
Thanks. A good effort and I think that's about as much as could be done with this photo and I don't think she would find it natural.
So here is the rest of the story... this is my second shoot with this realtor. The first was last year and she was happy with the results then. She wanted new pictures taken for a specific reason that has nothing to do with me or those photos. She requested the same white room, so I figured I'd be all set with just bounce flash, and I left my umbrella at home. Mistake.
Last year, fully retouched...
Pics in the OP are SOOC. Even though this pic is fully retouched, I didn't have to do much on the eyes because they were well lit by the eye-level umbrella. Bouncing up to the wall/celing corner was my mistake this year. I was just thrown off by the "harsh lighting" comment.
An "accurate" reproduction of a scene and a good photograph are often two different things.
(caveat: I am not a commercial photographer)
An "accurate" reproduction of a scene and a good photograph are often two different things.
Last years see how she is closer to the color of the room....still not bright enough in relation to the room....and don't put the corner of the wall coming out the back of her head.
Try turning her around and using the window light.
Good luck with it.
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