Engagement Picture - How to improve?

haringharing Registered Users Posts: 281 Major grins
edited June 23, 2012 in Weddings

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  • Moogle PepperMoogle Pepper Registered Users Posts: 2,950 Major grins
    edited June 14, 2012
    Sweeet. What is the light source? Are you using an external flash, constant strobe, or using a outdoor lamp?

    I think, if it was an outdoor lamp, it would be nice to add that in for context.
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  • divamumdivamum Registered Users Posts: 9,021 Major grins
    edited June 14, 2012
    Great capture. My only real problem with it is that it looks like 1950's movie rain, ie, a hose being sprayed ONLY on the subjects. If it was a real downpour, I'd love to see some more context around them....
  • Matthew SavilleMatthew Saville Registered Users, Retired Mod Posts: 3,352 Major grins
    edited June 15, 2012
    Yeah, add a few drops of rain throughout the rest of the image. Unless it is a fountain or something, in which case I'd need to see the source / faucet etc. instead of having the drops come from nowhere...

    Overall though, it's a gorgeous image!

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  • JamesbjenkinsJamesbjenkins Registered Users Posts: 435 Major grins
    edited June 16, 2012
    ^^ what they said.

    Love the concept, but it needs context. Where's the water coming from?
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  • caodoancaodoan Registered Users Posts: 3 Beginner grinner
    edited June 20, 2012
    I like, very romantic
  • haringharing Registered Users Posts: 281 Major grins
    edited June 23, 2012
    I agree. Next time I will make sure that the water around them is more visible. Fortunately, the rainy season is coming in South Florida!
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