A Street

torags

MarkR

Well, I'll comment!

It looks like a street with a lot of character-- reminds me of the wonderful drawings the late Will Eisner drew in his brooklyn comics.

I do think that the bottom 1/5 of the image isn't adding anything dramatic, and cropping it out might make the image stronger.

torags

Thanks for the comments Mark, much appreciated.

Space in front of walker, is the result of an old convention; leave space in front of direction of subject motion (perhaps I left too much)

torags

there you go; it looks better

jiro

I agree with the edited version. It looks more engaging. Nice work! thumbclap

torags

thanks Jiro & Mark