Four from a summer evening

bdcolenbdcolen Registered Users Posts: 3,804 Major grins
edited July 5, 2012 in Street and Documentary
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"He not busy being born is busy dying." Bob Dylan

"The more ambiguous the photograph is, the better it is..." Leonard Freed

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  • thoththoth Registered Users Posts: 1,085 Major grins
    edited July 4, 2012
    I'm liking #2, B.D.
    Travis
  • toragstorags Registered Users Posts: 4,615 Major grins
    edited July 4, 2012
    +1

    #3, I don't know if the value added by the dog is enough to trump that little girls face and the grandma - for a wide shot. Just a judgement call
    Rags
  • bdcolenbdcolen Registered Users Posts: 3,804 Major grins
    edited July 4, 2012
    Very different image if close in on girl and GMa.
    bd@bdcolenphoto.com
    "He not busy being born is busy dying." Bob Dylan

    "The more ambiguous the photograph is, the better it is..." Leonard Freed
  • jirojiro Registered Users Posts: 1,865 Major grins
    edited July 4, 2012
    #1 and 3 seems to be the strongest from the series. Loved the fleeting moments you captured, bdcolen.
    Sitting quietly, doing nothing. Spring comes and the grass grows by itself.

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  • michswissmichswiss Registered Users, Retired Mod Posts: 2,235 Major grins
    edited July 5, 2012
    If I'd taken the third, I'd be shitting myself. Awesome. My interpretation might have been slightly different and I wouldn't have posted it but well, awesome.

    First shot, ease off on saturation and vibrancy (or whatever is the same in your software). It just feels hot. Setting is nice and everything else works.

    Second is photographic emotional play. It's self consistent and it works... She's not in strife and I'd bet a laugh could have been evident shortly if wanted.

    Last shot. Um, it works. Slightly hot. I think this shot gains value as the relationship between the sisters (my assumption) develops. Still slightly too vibrant.

    I feel perfunctory tonight. So forgive the short declarative sentences.
  • bdcolenbdcolen Registered Users Posts: 3,804 Major grins
    edited July 5, 2012
    Thanks, Jenn - Good perfuntory crit, if a bit scatological. Laughing.gif!
    bd@bdcolenphoto.com
    "He not busy being born is busy dying." Bob Dylan

    "The more ambiguous the photograph is, the better it is..." Leonard Freed
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