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D3SshooterD3Sshooter Registered Users Posts: 1,188 Major grins
edited July 20, 2012 in People
Not much to tell about this shot, I just wonder what'll think about it.

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A photographer without a style, is like a pub without beer

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  • BilsenBilsen Registered Users Posts: 2,143 Major grins
    edited July 15, 2012
    Beautiful lighting and I like the POV.

    My only nit is very subjective. I don't like the models' shoulder to block her chin. Other than that 1" difference, I love it.
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  • D3SshooterD3Sshooter Registered Users Posts: 1,188 Major grins
    edited July 16, 2012
    JohnGalt_ny wrote: »
    Beautiful lighting and I like the POV.

    My only nit is very subjective. I don't like the models' shoulder to block her chin. Other than that 1" difference, I love it.

    Thanks John, indeed I would have been better if the chin would have just touched the tip of the shoulder.
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  • HackboneHackbone Registered Users Posts: 4,027 Major grins
    edited July 16, 2012
    The shoulder and open side/chest area compete too much with the face.The lower area seems distorted to me. The shot and lighting. Are great.
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  • zoomerzoomer Registered Users Posts: 3,688 Major grins
    edited July 16, 2012
    Take a small crop from the top and back. Burn the bright areas there so her face is the brightest part of the photo.
    I like it.
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  • Aleksandar VasicAleksandar Vasic Registered Users Posts: 334 Major grins
    edited July 20, 2012
    Very, very nice...
  • TinstaflTinstafl Registered Users Posts: 355 Major grins
    edited July 20, 2012
    I agree , burn and crop a bit.
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