Playing with ideas for #17 -

cbbrcbbr Registered Users Posts: 755 Major grins
edited July 23, 2012 in The Dgrin Challenges
C&C Appreciated


No Escape -

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Chad - www.brberrys.com
If I post it, please tell me how to make it better. My fragile ego can take it.

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  • WhatSheSawWhatSheSaw Registered Users Posts: 2,221 Major grins
    edited July 17, 2012
    I like the shot and it is technically well executed. I am not really getting escape from it. I have to admit, though, that I am having a hard time with conveying the idea of escape in a photo.

    Maybe a square crop?
  • cbbrcbbr Registered Users Posts: 755 Major grins
    edited July 17, 2012
    Thanks for the feedback! Any better like this-

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    Chad - www.brberrys.com
    If I post it, please tell me how to make it better. My fragile ego can take it.
  • WhatSheSawWhatSheSaw Registered Users Posts: 2,221 Major grins
    edited July 17, 2012
    I like the square crop better.

    It kind of reminds me of Through the Looking Glass.
  • cbbrcbbr Registered Users Posts: 755 Major grins
    edited July 19, 2012
    Thanks again!
    Chad - www.brberrys.com
    If I post it, please tell me how to make it better. My fragile ego can take it.
  • sapphire73sapphire73 Registered Users, Super Moderators Posts: 1,959 moderator
    edited July 23, 2012
    WhatSheSaw wrote: »
    I like the shot and it is technically well executed. I am not really getting escape from it. I have to admit, though, that I am having a hard time with conveying the idea of escape in a photo.

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  • WhatSheSawWhatSheSaw Registered Users Posts: 2,221 Major grins
    edited July 23, 2012
    I like this better than the one you entered. FWIW.
  • cbbrcbbr Registered Users Posts: 755 Major grins
    edited July 23, 2012
    Thank you both - this shot is something that I will keep playing with (I have another idea for it) but it does not seem right for this challenge. The shot that I entered will rub some the wong way, but taken with the intended humor it will cause some to laugh too. We laughed pretty hard.:D

    I tried to make the shot below work, but that bathroom is a construction zone and I just didn't pull the shot out of it that I wanted. But here it is - "Mom's Escape"


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    Chad - www.brberrys.com
    If I post it, please tell me how to make it better. My fragile ego can take it.
  • cbbrcbbr Registered Users Posts: 755 Major grins
    edited July 23, 2012
    This was the final shot from "It Escapes" BTW - Feedback, as always, is greatly appreciated.


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    Chad - www.brberrys.com
    If I post it, please tell me how to make it better. My fragile ego can take it.
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