MC 17 First Idea

WhatSheSawWhatSheSaw Registered Users Posts: 2,221 Major grins
edited July 24, 2012 in The Dgrin Challenges
So does this say escape to you? Any preference? How about the processing?

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#2
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  • rteest42rteest42 Registered Users Posts: 540 Major grins
    edited July 18, 2012
    Second...try in BW or in sepia? ....Yes, definitely escape...maybe more wrist? (a variation on one of the undone thoughts in my head!)
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  • red_zonered_zone Registered Users Posts: 533 Major grins
    edited July 18, 2012
    I definitely get escape!
    I personally like the 1st, with the processing, subject, and crop - I like the way the sky takes up 2/3 of the frame - I think it could signify freedom. I like #2 as well, but it looks over-sharpened, and has a funny glow effect. I think it would be interesting to see #1 in b&w, or selectively b&w hand and fence, leaving sky blue.

    I was thinking chain link at night with a shovel head, shallow hole, and a boot caught under the edge... there's just so many options with chain link!
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  • WhatSheSawWhatSheSaw Registered Users Posts: 2,221 Major grins
    edited July 19, 2012
    red_zone wrote: »
    I definitely get escape!
    I personally like the 1st, with the processing, subject, and crop - I like the way the sky takes up 2/3 of the frame - I think it could signify freedom. I like #2 as well, but it looks over-sharpened, and has a funny glow effect. I think it would be interesting to see #1 in b&w, or selectively b&w hand and fence, leaving sky blue.

    I was thinking chain link at night with a shovel head, shallow hole, and a boot caught under the edge... there's just so many options with chain link!

    Thanks, Jake. I might take a shot at re-processing #2.

    I like your idea for the chain link as well. Go for it. I think it would be fun to see several takes on chain link.
  • WhatSheSawWhatSheSaw Registered Users Posts: 2,221 Major grins
    edited July 19, 2012
    rteest42 wrote: »
    Second...try in BW or in sepia? ....Yes, definitely escape...maybe more wrist? (a variation on one of the undone thoughts in my head!)

    Thanks, Trish.

    Here is a shot with more wrist. Two different processing. Do you like this composition better? How about the processing - more light on the fingers or more silhouetted?

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  • PedalGirlPedalGirl Registered Users Posts: 794 Major grins
    edited July 19, 2012
    I actually like your #2 best. Nice take on theme.
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  • sapphire73sapphire73 Registered Users, Super Moderators Posts: 1,976 moderator
    edited July 23, 2012
    I like the "gritty" feel of #2 with the hand and the processing of the sky and fence in 4, so perhaps not much help. Great idea and composition!

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  • WhatSheSawWhatSheSaw Registered Users Posts: 2,221 Major grins
    edited July 24, 2012
    Thanks for the feedback, everyone!

    I found another shot this evening and processed it to look like a midnight run. What do you think, does it look like a moonlit night?

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