Creek

oldovaloldoval Registered Users Posts: 456 Major grins
edited July 21, 2012 in Landscapes

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  • OnkertjeOnkertje Registered Users Posts: 13 Big grins
    edited July 20, 2012
    I'm not sure if the black and white conversion adds anything to the picture. Would like to see the color version.
    Do you have other shots from a lower angle, so there's a little sky on the picture ?
  • oldovaloldoval Registered Users Posts: 456 Major grins
    edited July 20, 2012
    Onkertje wrote: »
    I'm not sure if the black and white conversion adds anything to the picture. Would like to see the color version.
    Do you have other shots from a lower angle, so there's a little sky on the picture ?

    I do have other shots of this same scene.... color, with sky, without sky, etc. But those are not here for your consideration, only this one.
  • OnkertjeOnkertje Registered Users Posts: 13 Big grins
    edited July 21, 2012
    I don't especially like this one.
    The water is placed in the center of the image.
    I can't see where it leads to.
    The tree is the only 'breaking' element in the picture. Happily it's there.

    You didn't attrack my attention with colors or teasing diagonal lines.
    You didn't use the rule of thirds.
    You don't make me curious to know what's not on the picture.

    That's why I asked if you didn't have any other pictures from the same shoot.
  • oldovaloldoval Registered Users Posts: 456 Major grins
    edited July 21, 2012
    If you don't like the image Onkertje, that's fine, thank you for the critisism. The image is composed exactly how I wanted.

    Don't however, ask "Got any other images I might like better"?
  • OnkertjeOnkertje Registered Users Posts: 13 Big grins
    edited July 21, 2012
    I'll keep that in mind.
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