Except for the white obstruction in the lower right corner of the frame, #2 works for me. I like the look into camera, the blue umbrella with the blue mural.
black mambaRegistered UsersPosts: 8,327Major grins
edited August 18, 2012
Welcome to the forum. I find this series to be very appealing. There's good subject selection and excellent overall presentation. Personally, I'm most excited to see that you have a strong propensity to record your scenes in color. I live in a world of color and photography that accentuates that reality resonates much more strongly with me.
That first shot is over-the-top good.... there's so many elements that draw you into the scene. I'm looking forward to seeing more of your visions of street life.
Tom
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Welcome to the forum. I find this series to be very appealing. There's good subject selection and excellent overall presentation. Personally, I'm most excited to see that you have a strong propensity to record your scenes in color. I live in a world of color and photography that accentuates that reality resonates much more strongly with me.
That first shot is over-the-top good.... there's so many elements that draw you into the scene. I'm looking forward to seeing more of your visions of street life.
Tom
Agree wholeheartedly. 1 is incredibly vibrant and a feast for the eyes. I do like the last one, because the balance is perfect between old and new, attentiveness and lack thereof, and eye contact vs. staring into the ground.
Welcome! Great first posting, I really like #2, but agree the "blob is a little distracting, I'd crop it out. #1 is great observation of the diversity of city street life, & I really like the "omg" look you caught on the girl in #4.
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That first shot is over-the-top good.... there's so many elements that draw you into the scene. I'm looking forward to seeing more of your visions of street life.
Tom
More please.....
Agree wholeheartedly. 1 is incredibly vibrant and a feast for the eyes. I do like the last one, because the balance is perfect between old and new, attentiveness and lack thereof, and eye contact vs. staring into the ground.
Certainly good to have you here.
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#1 is great, a feast of color
#2 is by far my favorite, good composition, great use of color, her look
The rest are, at least to me, just people walking...
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Yep you could of just posted #2 and said I shoot NYC, enough said
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