Winged

kpstatz

PhotoDavid78

This doesn't really work for me. The woman on the right is clipped. she should either be in the shot entirely or not at all. The woman on the left should be totally cropped out. Also, the woman with the wings has her right fist cut off. The vertical bars from the scaffolding should be straight at 90 degrees. the title itself made me expect a bit more. Her tattoos aren't prominent enough to be the focus.

kpstatz

Thanks for your opinion. I re-cropped the photo so that only the central person is shown. Other than that I beg to differ - her missing right hand doesn't bother me, and I think the wings are enough to make this interesting.

PhotoDavid78

This is so much better and nice work on adjusting your levels. Now the wings pop as it is cropped closer.

kpstatz

Thanks!