Welcome to DGrin, Cunningham. This is a great place to learn, so hopefully you'll stick around with us!
As for the image:
1) A bit underexposed, most of the hair is lost in blackness. Maybe only a half stop.
2) In contrast to the dark subject, which I imagine you'd like to be the focal point, the very bright blot of sky in the upper right is very distracting.
3) The image appears very slightly soft at the eyes.
4) The expression is quite good.
I've lurked for awhile but recently decided to post.
The area you pointed out is very distracting, thanks for pointing that out. As for the hair, I can't recover the details in most of it. I tried the half stop to one stop you suggested but it didn't come back to my satisfaction.
I did update the image with the new, hopefully less distracting, background.
Welcome to DGrin, Cunningham. This is a great place to learn, so hopefully you'll stick around with us!
As for the image:
1) A bit underexposed, most of the hair is lost in blackness. Maybe only a half stop.
2) In contrast to the dark subject, which I imagine you'd like to be the focal point, the very bright blot of sky in the upper right is very distracting.
3) The image appears very slightly soft at the eyes.
4) The expression is quite good.
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As for the image:
1) A bit underexposed, most of the hair is lost in blackness. Maybe only a half stop.
2) In contrast to the dark subject, which I imagine you'd like to be the focal point, the very bright blot of sky in the upper right is very distracting.
3) The image appears very slightly soft at the eyes.
4) The expression is quite good.
Look forward to seeing more from you.
Quincy,
I've lurked for awhile but recently decided to post.
The area you pointed out is very distracting, thanks for pointing that out. As for the hair, I can't recover the details in most of it. I tried the half stop to one stop you suggested but it didn't come back to my satisfaction.
I did update the image with the new, hopefully less distracting, background.