I think this works as a street shot but it could be a lot stronger with a tighter crop. The text at the bottom of the frame draws my eyes away from the subject. On the other hand, the "Tattoo" sign in the background is good and adds to the photo, but gets a little lost in the background with all the stuff going on at the bottom of the photo. I tried a different crop and I think it's stronger this way:
Hope you don't mind, I'll take it down if you want. Just figured it would be easier to show what I was suggesting rather than only describing it.
I will not judge the model as we are all given something by mother nature , some more , some less. As a portret, I tend to say "no that is not it " However as street photography , I say "love-it".. It reminds me a bit of "Streetview".
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Thank you. She did not know she was posing. She was just standing there so I shot her
Thank you very much, Javier
It totally works that that it isn't a "flattering" angle. edgier proccessing and vignette might work here.
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Hope you don't mind, I'll take it down if you want. Just figured it would be easier to show what I was suggesting rather than only describing it.
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14-24 24-70 70-200mm (vr2)
85 and 50 1.4
45 PC and sb910 x2
http://www.danielkimphotography.com
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Thank you very much, Javier
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