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Come on, vogue

JavierJavier Registered Users Posts: 152 Major grins
edited September 1, 2012 in People

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    HackboneHackbone Registered Users Posts: 4,027 Major grins
    edited August 27, 2012
    Like the shot but not a flattering pose for her.
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    JavierJavier Registered Users Posts: 152 Major grins
    edited August 27, 2012
    Hackbone wrote: »
    Like the shot but not a flattering pose for her.

    Thank you. She did not know she was posing. She was just standing there so I shot her :D
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    QarikQarik Registered Users Posts: 4,959 Major grins
    edited August 28, 2012
    Javier wrote: »
    Thank you. She did not know she was posing. She was just standing there so I shot her :D

    It totally works that that it isn't a "flattering" angle. edgier proccessing and vignette might work here.
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    Tim KamppinenTim Kamppinen Registered Users Posts: 816 Major grins
    edited August 28, 2012
    I think this works as a street shot but it could be a lot stronger with a tighter crop. The text at the bottom of the frame draws my eyes away from the subject. On the other hand, the "Tattoo" sign in the background is good and adds to the photo, but gets a little lost in the background with all the stuff going on at the bottom of the photo. I tried a different crop and I think it's stronger this way:

    i-LqL8h4z-XL.jpg

    Hope you don't mind, I'll take it down if you want. Just figured it would be easier to show what I was suggesting rather than only describing it.
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    QarikQarik Registered Users Posts: 4,959 Major grins
    edited August 29, 2012
    I like the original crop much better. the lettering at bottom left adds asymmetrical symmetry (if that makes sense) to the shot and I like her shoes!
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    kdogkdog Administrators Posts: 11,681 moderator
    edited August 30, 2012
    Yeah, I like it the way it is. Great catch.
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    D3SshooterD3Sshooter Registered Users Posts: 1,187 Major grins
    edited August 31, 2012
    I will not judge the model as we are all given something by mother nature , some more , some less. As a portret, I tend to say "no that is not it " However as street photography , I say "love-it".. It reminds me a bit of "Streetview".
    A photographer without a style, is like a pub without beer
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    hamsterhamster Registered Users Posts: 361 Major grins
    edited August 31, 2012
    Love it. I think she's quite lovely as is.
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    BrettDeutschBrettDeutsch Registered Users Posts: 365 Major grins
    edited August 31, 2012
    I wouldn't change a thing. Not everyone looks like a model (and nobody stands like one in real life).
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    JavierJavier Registered Users Posts: 152 Major grins
    edited September 1, 2012
    Thanks for the comments folks. Sorry for the delay as well.
    Work has me super busy.
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    angevin1angevin1 Registered Users Posts: 3,403 Major grins
    edited September 1, 2012
    I wouldn't change a thing. Not everyone looks like a model (and nobody stands like one in real life).

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    tom wise
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