Scrimmage Field Hockey

wmstummewmstumme Registered Users Posts: 466 Major grins
edited August 29, 2012 in Sports
Just a warm-up before the in-conference stuff starts. I'm trying to get back in shape too....

I cropped these wide on purpose to try and give some perspective. Does it work?

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Regards

Will
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Comments

  • IcebearIcebear Registered Users Posts: 4,015 Major grins
    edited August 29, 2012
    Hey Will,
    Since you asked . . .in general, too much extraneous space for my taste. ne_nau.gif
    #1: Everything but the player is wasted.
    #2: Great facial expression on #11, but I'd crop it 4x5 (portrait)l and lose everything to camera right of her.
    #3: The opponent is too far from the player with the ball to add interest, so I'd crop just like my suggestion for #2.
    #4: Lose everything to camera left of the ball.
    #5: I know what you're trying to do, and it's a good coaching shot, but it'd be a more effective image if you throw away the player to camera right.
    #6: Ball's to far away to help the shot.
    Question: Do #7 & #11 and whoever's in shot #1 get their hairbands from the same shop? :D
    John :
    Natural selection is responsible for every living thing that exists.
    D3s, D500, D5300, and way more glass than the wife knows about.
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