#110 Smooth or not...

bfluegiebfluegie Registered Users Posts: 839 Major grins
edited September 3, 2012 in The Dgrin Challenges
Running out of time and ideas, so I decided to use what I had on hand.

1. One of my favorite fruits
Blackberries-Cream-1-L.jpg

2. A different view, but I'm not sure I like the lighter background
Blackberries-Cream-3-L.jpg

3. A close-up (macro really isn't my thing)
Blackberries-Cream-4-L.jpg

4. Even closer
Blackberries-Cream-5-L.jpg

5. Not a candidate, but just in case anyone doubted the end of this story... A reshoot will requie a trip to the store.
The-end-L.jpg

I'm leaning toward #1 at this time. Comments, suggestions, and criticism are all welcome. Thank you.
~~Barbara

Comments

  • kentwallerkentwaller Registered Users Posts: 158 Major grins
    edited September 3, 2012
    #1 is my choice - smooth - nice pic!
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  • cbbrcbbr Registered Users Posts: 755 Major grins
    edited September 3, 2012
    I like #1 best too - the dark BG and lighting is far better. I also like #3, but I am a macro fan. The crop in #4 is a bit to cramped IMO - #3 tells the story better.
    Chad - www.brberrys.com
    If I post it, please tell me how to make it better. My fragile ego can take it.
  • bfluegiebfluegie Registered Users Posts: 839 Major grins
    edited September 3, 2012
    Thanks for the feedback. I didn't notice last night, but photo #1 isn't straight. Maybe I was leaning when I looked at it. Oops. Anyway, I straightened it out a bit and cropped out some of the dark area to the right. Is this any better?

    #6
    Blackberries-Cream-1a-L.jpg

    Thanks again.
    ~~Barbara
  • cbbrcbbr Registered Users Posts: 755 Major grins
    edited September 3, 2012
    Funny thing is that I didn't notice either - the last crop s definitely better IMO though.
    Chad - www.brberrys.com
    If I post it, please tell me how to make it better. My fragile ego can take it.
  • sapphire73sapphire73 Registered Users, Super Moderators Posts: 1,970 moderator
    edited September 3, 2012
    Number 1 and it's tweak look good to me for this challenge.

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