111 - starscapes - feedback post challenge
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Hi everyone,
On the last challenge I was pressed for time as I spent a week offline up in Montana so I didn't get time to request C&C before I departed.
The photo I submitted on a whim was this one:
I would love to hear feedback on a few of others I took that night and almost submitted instead
A
I personally like this one the most because I'm a geek and those dishes are huge & awesome
B
a friend saw this one and said "I love how you did the juxtaposition between the dish and the cactus both pointing up to the sky" to which I replied "it was dark.. I didn't even know the plant was there" :rofl
C
...I was going to call this one "time scape". I think it would look better if I burned the plants in the foreground a bit?
On the last challenge I was pressed for time as I spent a week offline up in Montana so I didn't get time to request C&C before I departed.
The photo I submitted on a whim was this one:
I would love to hear feedback on a few of others I took that night and almost submitted instead
A
I personally like this one the most because I'm a geek and those dishes are huge & awesome
B
a friend saw this one and said "I love how you did the juxtaposition between the dish and the cactus both pointing up to the sky" to which I replied "it was dark.. I didn't even know the plant was there" :rofl
C
...I was going to call this one "time scape". I think it would look better if I burned the plants in the foreground a bit?
cheers,
Edward in Colorado
Edward in Colorado
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I agree, a great set and a preference for the last one. The left right sky gradient and the offset of the center of interest to the right is really effective and not your typical composition. Nice work!
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Edward in Colorado
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I like the sky better in the one you submitted and the last one.
All are really cool!
B is a fine shot, but a little yellow and it bugs me a bit - your others are better.
A is great detail on the dish, and the most definition of the milky way of any of the shots, and since it's just dish and stars, evicts a stronger theme - space / exploration / science - than any of the other ones.
In other words, C is a great landscape, and you could probably sell A to NASA or Getty or somebody!
Jake
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Yangchen
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