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Winter Coat

AlTheKillerAlTheKiller Registered Users Posts: 192 Major grins
edited September 23, 2012 in People
Black and White or Color? Or neither?

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It doesnt do much for me but I still like it for whatever reason :dunno

Please feel free to critique it as well. :thumb
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    HackboneHackbone Registered Users Posts: 4,027 Major grins
    edited September 23, 2012
    The title says we should be viewing the coat. These shots do not draw my attention to it. Maybe another title?
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    unique93unique93 Registered Users Posts: 69 Big grins
    edited September 23, 2012
    Color version is better for me...add white graduation on right side to disable shadow...sorry for bad english :D
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    coolpinskycoolpinsky Registered Users Posts: 211 Major grins
    edited September 23, 2012
    Color !!
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    JabfingerJabfinger Registered Users Posts: 125 Major grins
    edited September 23, 2012
    I like the color version
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    anonymouscubananonymouscuban Registered Users, Retired Mod Posts: 4,586 Major grins
    edited September 23, 2012
    Color is definitely better. Nice job.
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    AlTheKillerAlTheKiller Registered Users Posts: 192 Major grins
    edited September 23, 2012
    Thank you all! Also with the title, I never have any idea what to put haha. I figured it was better than "My girlfriend posing for me again"

    What would be a better title? Maybe something with a more emotional tie in?

    Just be happy I talked her into changing her eye make up haha. She came out looking like a clown so I had to figure out how to gently tell her she needs to change it.
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    adbsgicomadbsgicom Registered Users Posts: 3,615 Major grins
    edited September 23, 2012
    +1 on the color.... Nicely done!
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    anonymouscubananonymouscuban Registered Users, Retired Mod Posts: 4,586 Major grins
    edited September 23, 2012
    AlTheKiller wrote: »
    Thank you all! Also with the title, I never have any idea what to put haha. I figured it was better than "My girlfriend posing for me again"

    You want to join my "I suck at creating descriptive thread titles" club?
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    AlTheKillerAlTheKiller Registered Users Posts: 192 Major grins
    edited September 23, 2012
    anonymouscuban wrote: »
    You want to join my "I suck at creating descriptive thread titles" club?

    YES PLEASE!! clap.gif

    Its quite rare for me to have a title. When I was in school we always had to have titles for our work and mine were always lame.
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    novicesnappernovicesnapper Registered Users Posts: 445 Major grins
    edited September 23, 2012
    Lol, same here. I just looked at this in 2048 on Flicker, she has awesome eyes. The lipstick was a great touch. I might be inclined to do a little Iris work, to really make her eyes pop. I love the shadowing and the head tilt. Coat, what coat? lol Nice work.
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