Good photo! Just a few things:
Straighten the photo a bit - seems to be leaning to the left just a touch.
Possibly too aggressive with the skin softening (or it's just my screen? Someone else tell me I'm right/crazy here - her teeth appear to be softened and so is her chin.).
Same, but the other direction with the eye enhancement.
Top-left corner is way hot and pulling my eye.
Her skin looks blurry and fake. Back off a bit on that. My guess is the girl is 17 or 18 - she probably has pretty good skin without a lot of retouching.
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Straighten the photo a bit - seems to be leaning to the left just a touch.
Possibly too aggressive with the skin softening (or it's just my screen? Someone else tell me I'm right/crazy here - her teeth appear to be softened and so is her chin.).
Same, but the other direction with the eye enhancement.
Top-left corner is way hot and pulling my eye.
Her skin looks blurry and fake. Back off a bit on that. My guess is the girl is 17 or 18 - she probably has pretty good skin without a lot of retouching.
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