Halloween Closing In! My Trip Through The Graveyard~~~
Tybrad
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You've got some great potential here and I'd like to offer some impressions and suggestions (all my subjective opinion, of course):
The setting is wonderful and I'm jealous because such a setting is very hard (if not impossible) to find in So. California. We are very "new" out here.
In general, these compositions feel a bit rushed and incomplete - some cramped, and some as though part of the picture is missing. (I'm sure shooting in a old graveyard is a bit of a different experience!)
For example, in #4, you may have meant to emphasize the dead leaves, but, by including the cut-off outline of the headstone, it looks "in-between" to me.
And, #9 has a lot in it, but because the fore-ground elements overlap the mid-ground in a portrait orientation, it feels cramped.
Fisheye and geometrically distorted images are actually quite difficult to do well - for anyone - the question is always whether the effect is a net positive and makes the image better.
I think with these, you have a near-miss - especially in #8 - the looming trees lend a "mood", but the graveyard portion is over-powered and under-lit.
Lighting is, of course, a key element - especially in a graveyard!
Although it is somewhat flat, the lighting is pretty good and the overcast condition is probably better than (full) sun - hopefully you can go back and get other combinations of time-of-day and illumination.
Watch your crops - the white stripe at the top-left of #7 is distracting.
Definitely some good material for B&W conversions - keep working that process.
Happy Halloween! Watch-out for Spooks!