DSS #116 Low Key - Idea

JennJenn Registered Users Posts: 1,009 Major grins
edited November 15, 2012 in The Dgrin Challenges
Do either of these work? Thanks for your suggestions... :D



Dried Roses A - color version
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Dried Roses B - B&W version
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Jenn (from Oklahoma)
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  • sweetharmonysweetharmony Registered Users Posts: 405 Major grins
    edited November 15, 2012
    Jenn, for me, in the colour version there are a few splotches of teal against the black background that are super distracting.
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  • JennJenn Registered Users Posts: 1,009 Major grins
    edited November 15, 2012
    sweetharmony wrote: »
    Jenn, for me, in the colour version there are a few splotches of teal against the black background that are super distracting.

    I can't see any teal .. where do you see it?

    I did a 2nd edit .. is this better?

    Dried Roses B - color version
    i-xzK65zb-X2.jpg
    Jenn (from Oklahoma)
    Panasonic Lumix 10x DMC-TZ3 :photo
    Leica Mega O.I.S./28mm WIDE :smile6
  • dniednie Users Awaiting Email Confirmation Posts: 1,351 Major grins
    edited November 15, 2012
    I didn't see the teal either, but then, on my monitor I probably wouldn't. I do see the blue cast to the bottle though in the first one and see why the black could have a blue look. The second color version seems to fix that. As far as the picture itself, yes, it works as Low Key and is a nice shot, but it isn't grabbing me for some reason and I don't know what it is. It may very well be just me... it is one of those days. ne_nau.gif
    Donna

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  • JennJenn Registered Users Posts: 1,009 Major grins
    edited November 15, 2012
    dnie wrote: »
    I didn't see the teal either, but then, on my monitor I probably wouldn't. I do see the blue cast to the bottle though in the first one and see why the black could have a blue look. The second color version seems to fix that. As far as the picture itself, yes, it works as Low Key and is a nice shot, but it isn't grabbing me for some reason and I don't know what it is. It may very well be just me... it is one of those days. ne_nau.gif

    Maybe I just need a great title for it ... Those are roses my husband gave me for my birthday and I dried them, but I can't think of a great title, yet.
    Jenn (from Oklahoma)
    Panasonic Lumix 10x DMC-TZ3 :photo
    Leica Mega O.I.S./28mm WIDE :smile6
  • dniednie Users Awaiting Email Confirmation Posts: 1,351 Major grins
    edited November 15, 2012
    :) I am terribly at titles.
    Like I say, I am sure it is just me. I can't find anything wrong with the picture. I'm not a rose person, maybe that is all it is.
    Donna

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  • PedalGirlPedalGirl Registered Users Posts: 794 Major grins
    edited November 15, 2012
    Of these, I'm partial to the B/W version. :)
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  • JennJenn Registered Users Posts: 1,009 Major grins
    edited November 15, 2012
    PedalGirl wrote: »
    Of these, I'm partial to the B/W version. :)

    Thanks!
    dnie wrote: »
    :) I am terribly at titles.
    Like I say, I am sure it is just me. I can't find anything wrong with the picture. I'm not a rose person, maybe that is all it is.

    I think I'll call it: Frozen In Time
    Jenn (from Oklahoma)
    Panasonic Lumix 10x DMC-TZ3 :photo
    Leica Mega O.I.S./28mm WIDE :smile6
  • dniednie Users Awaiting Email Confirmation Posts: 1,351 Major grins
    edited November 15, 2012
    Jenn wrote: »
    I think I'll call it: Frozen In Time

    I like it!! Good title!
    Donna

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  • sweetharmonysweetharmony Registered Users Posts: 405 Major grins
    edited November 15, 2012
    Teal's gone..........it's a tricky thing with monitors.....
    Leah

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  • JennJenn Registered Users Posts: 1,009 Major grins
    edited November 15, 2012
    dnie wrote: »
    I like it!! Good title!

    thanks! Hope it is catchy enough. :)
    sweetharmony wrote: »
    Teal's gone..........it's a tricky thing with monitors.....

    I hear that! Every monitor I have the images look a little different on, so I try to edit on my work monitor because it's newer! Laughing.gif
    Jenn (from Oklahoma)
    Panasonic Lumix 10x DMC-TZ3 :photo
    Leica Mega O.I.S./28mm WIDE :smile6
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