Untitled 11/21/12

thoththoth Registered Users Posts: 1,085 Major grins
edited December 10, 2012 in Street and Documentary
christmas_preparation_2012%20%281%20of%201%29-L.jpg

Thanks for looking,
Travis
Travis

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  • thoththoth Registered Users Posts: 1,085 Major grins
    edited December 9, 2012
    Since there's been some action, of late, I'd like to give this another go. thumb.gif
    Travis
  • michswissmichswiss Registered Users, Retired Mod Posts: 2,235 Major grins
    edited December 10, 2012
    I think this is a keeper for the back catalogue. It works to a level but just feels jumbled to me.
  • thoththoth Registered Users Posts: 1,085 Major grins
    edited December 10, 2012
    michswiss wrote: »
    I think this is a keeper for the back catalogue. It works to a level but just feels jumbled to me.

    Thanks, Jen. I was actually hoping to capture some tension of our country's new favorite holiday, Black Friday. Perhaps as a part of a set this may do better.
    Travis
  • red_zonered_zone Registered Users Posts: 533 Major grins
    edited December 10, 2012
    I'm not really a documentary shooter, but I think this would have been a stronger shot without the back of the standing boy's head. I like the juxtaposition of the adverts vs. iPad, & general scene.
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    Jake
  • jpope42jpope42 Registered Users Posts: 150 Major grins
    edited December 10, 2012
    Analog vs digital? two ways to approach shopping these days. I like it, although I agree with the comment about the boy's head.
    jim pope
    www.borrowedlightphotography.com
  • thoththoth Registered Users Posts: 1,085 Major grins
    edited December 10, 2012
    Thank you both for your comments. thumb.gif
    Travis
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