Altered state

toragstorags Registered Users Posts: 4,615 Major grins
edited November 28, 2012 in Other Cool Shots
From a series I'm doing - Altered states

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  • Dr CalohandreDr Calohandre Banned Posts: 213 Major grins
    edited November 22, 2012
    I feel it is a little truncated and there are way too many distractive elements in the shot: the Ferrari needs more foreground as well as going the same direction as the painted cars, both linerally and perspectively. The shadows to the car's right need to be gone. The rodeo clown really needs a different backdrop as he sits now, seems to be floating on a mask of "gray nothing." Not sure about the vertical strip of stars or their purpose and the lines and leaf on the roadway don't provide any direction or purpose. For me, there is no "story" or "theme" to make me curious.

    Generally like your work, but this one leaves me a bit flat.
  • joshhuntnmjoshhuntnm Registered Users Posts: 1,924 Major grins
    edited November 22, 2012
  • toragstorags Registered Users Posts: 4,615 Major grins
    edited November 23, 2012
    Thanks for all the comments.

    Just a whimsical shot for the grandkids.. :D
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  • toragstorags Registered Users Posts: 4,615 Major grins
    edited November 28, 2012
    Just what the doctor ordered

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