A very pretty young lady though I think I would look at a little sharpening on her eyes and perhaps some color cast removal on the whites of her eyes and her teeth. On my monitor they have picked up on a lot of the yellows predominate in the background.
I would also crop to an 8 x 10 format, cropping just above the owl pendant. Just an opinion.
I really like this but several items catch my attention too much. This would have been very feminine with her chin down and a head tip. Shooting into the shoulder is a hard look for a female. Open the shoulders a bit and drop the far shoulder. I like the overall warmth of the shot.
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I would also crop to an 8 x 10 format, cropping just above the owl pendant. Just an opinion.
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