Commute 2

PattiPatti Registered Users Posts: 1,576 Major grins
edited December 23, 2012 in Street and Documentary
Another from my train series

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... I'm still peeling potatoes.

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  • bfjrbfjr Registered Users Posts: 10,980 Major grins
    edited December 22, 2012
    not as powerful as "Commute".

    Closer here might of been better.
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  • PhotogbikerPhotogbiker Registered Users Posts: 351 Major grins
    edited December 22, 2012
    I like that they are all looking same way, but agree with bfjr that closer might be better. Even if you lose the person in the right window, just the guy on stair and kid in open window would be great.
  • PattiPatti Registered Users Posts: 1,576 Major grins
    edited December 22, 2012
    Here you go. I agree this one is not nearly as strong as Commute, nor is it as sharp. I was drawn to the man on the step smoking and also liked the man on the right wrapped with his scarf. Cropping him out to bring the others closer is a way to go. Thanks.


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    The use of a camera is similar to that of a knife. You can use it to peel potatoes, or carve a flute. ~ E. Kahlmeyer
    ... I'm still peeling potatoes.

    patti hinton photography
  • JuanoJuano Registered Users Posts: 4,891 Major grins
    edited December 22, 2012
    I actually like this better than commute. Would a square crop help?
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  • thoththoth Registered Users Posts: 1,085 Major grins
    edited December 22, 2012
    I'll be different, Patti. I dig the original. I like the opportunity to imagine the differences between the passengers.
    Travis
  • michswissmichswiss Registered Users, Retired Mod Posts: 2,235 Major grins
    edited December 23, 2012
    I'm with Travis. The original is great as it is. If it's going to be used in a webpage or other small format, then you can always crop it then. As it is, it's fine.

    I've enjoyed these two train shots.
  • bfjrbfjr Registered Users Posts: 10,980 Major grins
    edited December 23, 2012
    thoth wrote: »
    I'll be different, Patti. I dig the original. I like the opportunity to imagine the differences between the passengers.
    michswiss wrote: »
    I'm with Travis. The original is great as it is. If it's going to be used in a webpage or other small format, then you can always crop it then. As it is, it's fine.

    I've enjoyed these two train shots.


    Well see there ya go ! :D
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  • lensmolelensmole Registered Users Posts: 1,548 Major grins
    edited December 23, 2012
    I do too prefer the expression the image conveys in the original .

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  • PattiPatti Registered Users Posts: 1,576 Major grins
    edited December 23, 2012
    Interesting breakdown of preferences. I should just go with my gut and stop second guessing myself.
    The use of a camera is similar to that of a knife. You can use it to peel potatoes, or carve a flute. ~ E. Kahlmeyer
    ... I'm still peeling potatoes.

    patti hinton photography
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