Passion

torags

I've been busy... off in a different place

C&C appreciated

black mamba

You lost me on this one, buddy. There's too many elements...in too much disaray...to create and sustain any sense of passion. It's all fairly jumbled to my eye, due in no small part to the format of presentation.

Welcome back,

Tom

Earache

Hi Rags.... good to see you posting!
I always like to see you (anyone) creating, testing, trying..... though, as always (for all of us), YMMV.
I agree with Tom to a degree - but I do get the sense of intimacy and voyeurism that I think you meant to convey.
I like the concept of the torn-up edges revealing something below.

torags

Thanks for looking in and the comments guys

I liked the torn pages for a couple of images. That was my second, this was my first, "Fashion"



Seems like I'm doing less photography nowadays; more image making (it's fun)

I'll get back on track with my trip to India and Nepal in a few weeks

Earache

torags wrote: »

Thanks for looking in and the comments guys

I liked the torn pages for a couple of images. That was my second, this was my first, "Fashion"




I'll get back on track with my trip to India and Nepal in a few weeks

That's nice - a much more effective implementation of the idea.

Wow! Have a safe and wonderful trip! Keep an eye out for the Yeti!

black mamba

To my mind, there's a lot more cohesion evidenced in the second shot....a much more effective presentation.

Stay safe,

Tom