Finally got a full size back drop

AlTheKillerAlTheKiller Registered Users Posts: 192 Major grins
edited January 29, 2013 in People
and of course my shoot was very rudely interrupted so I think I had maybe 10 shots before packing up and leaving :rolleyes

The only one I liked out of the set:

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please feel free to critique or comment
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  • anonymouscubananonymouscuban Registered Users, Retired Mod Posts: 4,586 Major grins
    edited January 29, 2013
    I think I've been so wrapped up in my own 365 thread that I missed this one.

    The BG looks great. Nice and evenly lit with no wrinkles.

    I'm not so keen on the shot. It's not bad, but you've had better. I don't like the catchlights in the shades. She looks like she has bug-eyes. Also, I think your main is a bit hot on her arm and shirt. I think if you had moved the main more over to her camera left, so she's more short lit that would have cut the brightness down on the shirt and arm and put her front side more in shadow. As is, she looks a bit wide on the bottom when I know she is not from previous photos. The dresses "sagginess" in the front doesn't help either. Also bring her back elbow over a bit so it creates a bit more hour-glass shape.
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