I really like this composition. There are some artefacts in the conversion, specifically a halo around the man. I've seen this before in my own conversions when I've pushed the mid-contrast levels and toning.
I really like this composition. There are some artefacts in the conversion, specifically a halo around the man. I've seen this before in my own conversions when I've pushed the mid-contrast levels and toning.
While the second doesn't have the halos, I liked the pp direction the first was taking as well. It probably just needs a fresh start in thinking through how to get the same dynamic levels in play. Maybe another close look at the RAW file would help.
While the second doesn't have the halos, I liked the pp direction the first was taking as well. It probably just needs a fresh start in thinking through how to get the same dynamic levels in play. Maybe another close look at the RAW file would help.
Thank you both for your feedback ! I will try to tweak it some more .
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Thank you for that ! Here is a rework .
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I like it. It feels desolate and cold but the subject seems equipped.
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Thanks Ben ! Glad you like it . I think he is overdressed .
Thank you both for your feedback ! I will try to tweak it some more .
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