The Great White North

lensmolelensmole Registered Users Posts: 1,548 Major grins
edited February 14, 2013 in Street and Documentary

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  • michswissmichswiss Registered Users, Retired Mod Posts: 2,235 Major grins
    edited February 10, 2013
    I really like this composition. There are some artefacts in the conversion, specifically a halo around the man. I've seen this before in my own conversions when I've pushed the mid-contrast levels and toning.
  • lensmolelensmole Registered Users Posts: 1,548 Major grins
    edited February 10, 2013
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    michswiss wrote: »
    I really like this composition. There are some artefacts in the conversion, specifically a halo around the man. I've seen this before in my own conversions when I've pushed the mid-contrast levels and toning.

    Thank you for that ! Here is a rework .

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  • bfjrbfjr Registered Users Posts: 10,980 Major grins
    edited February 10, 2013
    2nd version is better (no Halo)

    I like it. It feels desolate and cold but the subject seems equipped.
  • JuanoJuano Registered Users Posts: 4,890 Major grins
    edited February 11, 2013
    I think I prefer where the first version was going, as is it is a bit overdone but good.
  • michswissmichswiss Registered Users, Retired Mod Posts: 2,235 Major grins
    edited February 11, 2013
    While the second doesn't have the halos, I liked the pp direction the first was taking as well. It probably just needs a fresh start in thinking through how to get the same dynamic levels in play. Maybe another close look at the RAW file would help.
  • lensmolelensmole Registered Users Posts: 1,548 Major grins
    edited February 14, 2013
    bfjr wrote: »
    2nd version is better (no Halo)

    I like it. It feels desolate and cold but the subject seems equipped.

    Thanks Ben ! Glad you like it . I think he is overdressed . rolleyes1.gif
    Juano wrote: »
    I think I prefer where the first version was going, as is it is a bit overdone but good.
    michswiss wrote: »
    While the second doesn't have the halos, I liked the pp direction the first was taking as well. It probably just needs a fresh start in thinking through how to get the same dynamic levels in play. Maybe another close look at the RAW file would help.

    Thank you both for your feedback ! I will try to tweak it some more .
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