DSS#123 - Three for Consideration

billseyebillseye Registered Users Posts: 847 Major grins
edited February 27, 2013 in The Dgrin Challenges
I decided to create abstracts that don't rely on (camera) motion blur to be abstract. Feedback is welcome.

1.
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2.
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3.
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Bill Banning

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Comments

  • Keller3778Keller3778 Registered Users Posts: 11 Big grins
    edited February 24, 2013
    I like #2 the best of the 3. I wonder if some side lighting and maybe not a straight on angle would give it a little depth? I really do enjoy the flow of the composition from yellow to dark.

    I actually like the 4th one on your page better with the lighting it gives it more depth and texture.
  • cgmcdonaldcgmcdonald Registered Users Posts: 61 Big grins
    edited February 24, 2013
    #2 dido on the side light.
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  • MemolMemol Registered Users Posts: 115 Major grins
    edited February 25, 2013
    I like the colors in 2
  • kdotaylorkdotaylor Registered Users Posts: 1,280 Major grins
    edited February 25, 2013
    #2...I love the colors!
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  • MemolMemol Registered Users Posts: 115 Major grins
    edited February 25, 2013
    Yeah the colors in 2 draws the attention only i think the black dots on lower left corner distract my eyes. I think i know what it is :)
  • lkbartlkbart Registered Users Posts: 1,912 Major grins
    edited February 25, 2013
    I also really like the colors in #2, but I like the repeating pattern & diagonal lines in #3.
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  • CambysesCambyses Registered Users Posts: 141 Major grins
    edited February 27, 2013
    2 for me too. Like the texture and the colors.
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