Head shot
Since I have just given my opinions on your work I felt it was only fair to post one of my recent pics. This is an available light shot of one of my grandaughters.
Harry
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How many photographers does it take to change a light bulb? 50. One to change the bulb, and forty-nine to say, "I could have done that better!"
http://behret.smugmug.com/ NANPA member
How many photographers does it take to change a light bulb? 50. One to change the bulb, and forty-nine to say, "I could have done that better!"
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gubbs.smugmug.com
Good shot! As gubbs already pointed out the post in the background is a unfortunate distraction. I wouldn't worry about it too much though.
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I agree that it makes you wonder what she is thinking about. You can see the gears turning in her head. How's that for implying motion in a still photograph?
I don't mind the wooden post, however. It doesn't feel, to me, as if its growing out of her head, since it is so off-center of her head. It gives me a sense of location though, it lets me know she is on a porch. For that reason I like it, even if it is merged with her head.
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Harry
http://behret.smugmug.com/ NANPA member
How many photographers does it take to change a light bulb? 50. One to change the bulb, and forty-nine to say, "I could have done that better!"
If you do use that magnetic tool to isolate her from the post to take the post out, feather it, more than you would have expected. The helps me with the hair, can't give you the numbers, am not a numbers person.
But I do like the photograph. Nice looking girl lost in thought.
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