Nephew's Portrait

JimMJimM Registered Users Posts: 1,389 Major grins
edited November 29, 2005 in People
This was a rushed portrait over Thanksgiving. Thoughts? Critique? How could I make it better?

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(2)
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Cameras: >(2) Canon 20D .Canon 20D/grip >Canon S200 (p&s)
Glass: >Sigma 17-35mm,f2.8-4 DG >Tamron 28-75mm,f2.8 >Canon 100mm 2.8 Macro >Canon 70-200mm,f2.8L IS >Canon 200mm,f2.8L
Flash: >550EX >Sigma EF-500 DG Super >studio strobes

Sites: Jim Mitte Photography - Livingston Sports Photos - Brighton Football Photos

Comments

  • lynnmalynnma Registered Users, Retired Mod Posts: 5,208 Major grins
    edited November 29, 2005
    JimM wrote:
    This was a rushed portrait over Thanksgiving. Thoughts? Critique? How could I make it better?
    Hi Jim..

    I'd like to come back and have a closer look later as I have to rush out but I'd like to say I love number 2 specially.. I think I would have cropped a little off the top, bringing their closer to the top (rule of thirds?)... lovely kids.. and definitely keepers!
    I'd like to look again later.

    Thanks for sharing
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  • Frog LadyFrog Lady Registered Users Posts: 1,091 Major grins
    edited November 29, 2005
    cute boys!
    Hi Jim,

    I like the pictures - especially the expressions on their faces in #1iloveyou.gif . Unfortunately, I think you should have opened up the aperature a bit more in that shot - the older boy looks much softer and more in the backgroun than the baby.

    Colleen
    Colleen
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    check out my (sports) pics: ColleenBonney.smugmug.com

    *Thanks to Boolsacho for the avatar photo (from the dgrin portrait project)
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