I find the composition a little awkward...the way he's tipping the guitar up it's almost like he's trying to keep from falling out of the frame. I wish he had more room on his left side so that we could lose the bikes to his right.
I like the harsh shadows playing across his face though.
I find the composition a little awkward...the way he's tipping the guitar up it's almost like he's trying to keep from falling out of the frame. I wish he had more room on his left side so that we could lose the bikes to his right.
I like the harsh shadows playing across his face though.
Perhaps he just trying not to fall down, period or pleading for more attention or .........
I actually purposefully kept the bikes in, did a crop the other way didn't care for it.
Precisely, Lens. Composition is excellent. I might do some dodging to give us a but more sense of the right side of his face, and that whatever on the wall to his right.
You know, I'm warming to this more and more...if I accept that the bikes are an integral part of the image, the composition suddenly works...everything balances very nicely.
Precisely, Lens. Composition is excellent. I might do some dodging to give us a but more sense of the right side of his face, and that whatever on the wall to his right.
You know, I'm warming to this more and more...if I accept that the bikes are an integral part of the image, the composition suddenly works...everything balances very nicely.
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Outside of the light which fell on him, his overall demeanor attracted me as well.
Original title was "Elvis ?"
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I like the harsh shadows playing across his face though.
Perhaps he just trying not to fall down, period or pleading for more attention or .........
I actually purposefully kept the bikes in, did a crop the other way didn't care for it.
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You are quite right.
How I saw it.
Thanks and I'll take a second look.
Excellent to hear!!
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