Seven is a VERY strong image IMHO. Nice pose and the lighting choice gives is a nice sultry feel. I like the fact that the light on her face is stronger than the light on her keister.
Six had potential, but I think the choice of 24mm has made her head and hands look too large in comparison to the rest of her.
Four is kind of neat too, but I find myself wishing I could see a little more of her face but it is interesting to look at for me nonetheless.
Seven is a VERY strong image IMHO. Nice pose and the lighting choice gives is a nice sultry feel. I like the fact that the light on her face is stronger than the light on her keister.
Six had potential, but I think the choice of 24mm has made her head and hands look too large in comparison to the rest of her.
Four is kind of neat too, but I find myself wishing I could see a little more of her face but it is interesting to look at for me nonetheless.
you need a lot more lights here. some part of her just gets lost in about every shot. also the processing is all over the place..different WB, different skin tones and textures. lastly you need to shoot wider..all sorts of cut off limbs and body parts!
#5 is my favorite. The composition, pose and lighting are excellent. I don't think you needed to bring out the shadows as much as you did, in post, but that's my only nit.
you need a lot more lights here. some part of her just gets lost in about every shot. also the processing is all over the place..different WB, different skin tones and textures. lastly you need to shoot wider..all sorts of cut off limbs and body parts!
Thanks, for processing, I wasn't going for a consistant style, but what I felt fit for each photo. In regards to cropping, I didn't intend to keep everything in but focus in on what I felt was a stronger picture. When zooming in and out the tighter crops looked better to me at the expense of lost parts. I have others from the set that have just about everything lit but to me they looked boring. I like shadows as much as light.
#5 is my favorite. The composition, pose and lighting are excellent. I don't think you needed to bring out the shadows as much as you did, in post, but that's my only nit.
Thanks. The shadow part was brought out more by the BW conversion. I debated on lessening it or leaving.
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Six had potential, but I think the choice of 24mm has made her head and hands look too large in comparison to the rest of her.
Four is kind of neat too, but I find myself wishing I could see a little more of her face but it is interesting to look at for me nonetheless.
For a "grins and giggles" session. Very nice!
Thanks! My favorite is 7 as well.
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Thanks, for processing, I wasn't going for a consistant style, but what I felt fit for each photo. In regards to cropping, I didn't intend to keep everything in but focus in on what I felt was a stronger picture. When zooming in and out the tighter crops looked better to me at the expense of lost parts. I have others from the set that have just about everything lit but to me they looked boring. I like shadows as much as light.
Thanks. The shadow part was brought out more by the BW conversion. I debated on lessening it or leaving.