Before I say anything I want to state this: Your photography is very good.
Now this: Fill the frame more with the models, otherwise it looks like an editorial for a high school senior shoot rather than a fashion editorial to push the designers work. Don't put the subject behind other objects if you are trying to push clothing / model, always have the subject in the foreground. To me these photos say more "portrait session" than "fashion designer clothing line" Photography is good - but, not for fashion. Keep it up!!! seriously your photography is very good!!
Yes. What "schming" said. I like your images, but if you were trying for commercial utility, they don't work.
Pretty girls and attractive photography, but they don't feature the fashion.
John :
Natural selection is responsible for every living thing that exists.
D3s, D500, D5300, and way more glass than the wife knows about.
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Sam
www.cameraone.biz
Now this: Fill the frame more with the models, otherwise it looks like an editorial for a high school senior shoot rather than a fashion editorial to push the designers work. Don't put the subject behind other objects if you are trying to push clothing / model, always have the subject in the foreground. To me these photos say more "portrait session" than "fashion designer clothing line" Photography is good - but, not for fashion. Keep it up!!! seriously your photography is very good!!
Klinh Evelyn Grace Photography
Fashion & Commercial
(2)Mamiya RZ67 IID, Mamiya 645 AFD II, Leaf Aptus 65, Profoto D1's, Capture One.
http://www.klinhevelyngracephotography.com
Marcelo
Pretty girls and attractive photography, but they don't feature the fashion.
Natural selection is responsible for every living thing that exists.
D3s, D500, D5300, and way more glass than the wife knows about.