Attempts DSS 127 - need you C&C

ShootingStar

Hi everyone
I am thinking all the time about these poem and I am having difficulties getting a nice photo with meaning.
Here are three attempts. I am not convinced but your C&C will help me a lot.

Thanks !

1. ...or I could create you a rainbow constellation...




2. ...or I could build you a rainbow...




3. so let's follow the rainbow together

richtersl

My favorite of the 3 is #2. Love the colors! Nice depth of field, too. It would make a great desktop wallpaper or a Facebook cover.

#1 is also very nice, but I wish it was better in focus. Can you try reshooting that? I really like the heart shape and the dimension.

#3 doesn't do very much for me.

ShootingStar

Thanks Linda.

Sadly I cannot reshoot the first one.

As for #3 it is funny as it is the one I put the most effort in. So at the end, we should just go for it and not overthink!

torrbrae

Agree with Linda. #2 is also my favourite of the three.

#1 is well on theme, but the blurry, foreground bubbles detract.

#3 is interesting, but comes across as more something from a sci-fi movie than for a romantic poem.