Creepy Guy In Car #5298

kixsand

mayfly

I do like the movement conveyed by the three people on the platform. I wonder If the rightmost partial person was cropped out if the face in the window would stand out a little more.

Richard

When I read the title, I had the idea that you had shot thousands of creepy guys in cars.

I think mayfly makes a good point about the person on the right, but a better solution would have been to be a bit closer when you shot.

michswiss

While slightly closer is almost always better, I still like the core composition. But a judicious crop around all edges to eliminate the man on the right, some of the dead space top and bottom and some of the pole on the left should help.

kixsand

Thanks for all the opinions on the crop...I will re-visit.

kixsand

Good call - I think it's a stronger image this way. Definitely brings the subject more into focus.

I was sort of married to the continuity of the stream of people flowing down the platform - of which that person on the right was an important part in my mind. I liked the idea of having that guy there just to imply that out of frame, the stream of people continues down the platform...