Critique Requested - NSFW

dug117dug117 Registered Users Posts: 1 Beginner grinner
edited May 23, 2013 in Go Figure
I just purchased a couple of studio strobes and got the opportunity to practice with my friend Brandy. I know there are issues but I need to know if I'm on the right track. Comments and critiques are always welcome. Thank you.

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Comments

  • ScootersbabygirlScootersbabygirl Registered Users Posts: 224 Major grins
    edited May 14, 2013
    Small critique - the crease in your backdrop. If you can't steam it out, try to get it out in photoshop as it is definitely distracting :D
    http://www.randileephotography.com
  • IcebearIcebear Registered Users Posts: 4,015 Major grins
    edited May 23, 2013
    Move her forward . . . away from the backdrop. She's a wonderful model. Her personality seems to shine through.
    Edit: Oh, your white balance is all over the place.
    John :
    Natural selection is responsible for every living thing that exists.
    D3s, D500, D5300, and way more glass than the wife knows about.
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